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Regarding
sharing writing online, I
can not tell how my first impressions of this forum were a year
ago before even I had signed up for it.Threads were like scandals
to me, and members were like people exposing themselves!! This
might be a bit exaggeratedly written, but anyway I was not to be
blamed of that as a person who looked at writing as a private
personal act. Especially, knowing that I had at a young age a
skill of reading people's characters through their writings.
Thanks God, this has all changed by now.
Many factors contributed to this change. Some of these factors
are:
I
am older now. In comparison to my early teenage, things are more
settled...vision is clearer. Consequently, writing has a new role
in my life that is less personal and more social.
I grew up as a
confident person and an English learner who don’t mind sharing and
laughing at her universal mistakes or misconceptions.
I figured out
that I am not obliged to be personal the moment I write, for
writing can be personal and impersonal. ( it may sound common
sense to someone who obtains a different view from what I used
to).
I came to believe
strongly that sharing means learning.
Despite that one of the most adequate ways of writing is the
online writing, it lets learners communicate with their colleagues
all over the world and a lot of learners will be able to interact
in a few minutes as they’re acquiring the experience of mutual
work. Moreover, their writing will be evaluated and they will get
quick responses and comments on theirs.
Through the online writing one can talk to native speakers and
that property lets foreign learners use the language in a proper
way which leads them to be accurate and correct. One also can
deduce the cultural backgrounds of those with whom he communicates
as well as their notions and ideas.
Online writing makes one express his feelings, thoughts and
attitudes without any sort of shyness, and lets one move from
being an introvert person to be sociable and extrovert one. It’s
also a chance for the talented to show their talents. In addition,
in discussing current issues on global problems one will be so
frank direct and open and it is a chance to persuade the obstinate
people with our opinions and defend our beliefs.
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I think it is time for our teachers and universities in Arab World
to consider online ýcollaboration. I have never shared my
writing with my classmates in traditional ýlearning for many
reasons; the first is the number of students who wish to learn
from ýeach other but do not find the mean to do so. The second is
that many students like me ýdo not want to use and discus their
writing because they write with the pen and if ýthere are any
changes it would be hard to them to rewrite the whole thing. ý
I think now I can share my papers with my pals and then take their
suggestion for the ýchanges and change it electronically in a very
simple manner. This is one reason I ýthink students should
practice typing and then learn to share writing to get feedback. ý
Sharing writing is one thing I start to love. I used to write for
my teacher only. No ýfeedback at all, Now with OWCp, I write to
you guys as you do write to me and we ýshare ideas and feelings as
you mentioned. I think this is great and we should inform ýour
friends to come and use this website because through my little
participations so ýfar, I can tell you that I learned from your
posted topics many vocabularies, many ýwiring styles and I learned
how to share my writing and also give comments to my ýfriends
wiring. ý
ý I can say frankly that I learn more effectively as you mentioned
than I do learn in my ýEnglish classroom that lacks motivation and
encouragement to improve your writing. ý
As for the advantages of
sharing on line, it is so many. Sharing on line helps us to
recognize the ideas of the other people in many countries and it
enables us to know different culture and civilization. It is
believed that to avoid the cunning of any people, you should know
their language, culture, civilization, and their way of thinking.
Writing on line gives us the chance to know new friends and make
many relationships, this is clear by sending messages which
express our ideas.
I think that the
freedom such forums offer does not always facilitate for the
expected learning to happen. In other words, we usually emphasize
that our label is “We write as we speak” that is meant to lessen
the tension that worrying over the correctness of the form might
cause. It does not at all mean totally ignoring the form, the
thing that we often do. I think that sharing our writing here
helps us improve our language but not necessarily our writing .
Sometimes we tend to apply “we write as we speak” literally in our
interaction which make our writing appear to be as written speech
rather than writing. It is true that writing is considered as
social dialogue. Yet, it has its own merits that distinguishes it
from speech.
The relation between
talk , speech, and text in interaction and reflection in computer
meditated group discussion, like OWCp, is explained by
Dimatteo(1990) as the following:
“They,
learners, create intensely visible language out of what they
consider to be forgettable, facile words their own talk and
conversations. They develop a sense that when they talk, they are
“Drafting” themselves, composing their own identities through a
speech that is also writing made utterly tangible”
Thus we are
supposed to consider our writing here as tidying up our own words.
Unlike face-to-face conversations, we have a chance to think ,
reflect, and organize our words by writing them in a
well-organized form. Applying the basics of writing would change
our words from a written speech to a well-composed written piece.
I
hope that I will not be misunderstood as emphasizing content
rather than the form. My point is that content comes first but
form is also important. For example, the guidelines of writing an
essay or paragraph should be employed because it helps in
conveying our thoughts properly.
Drafting plays a very important role in developing healthy writing
habits. In the first stages of drafting matters of the form should
not be given any attention as not to distract the ongoing process
of discovery that is writing. It is considered a process of
discovery because while writing we discover what we want to say
and what thoughts and ideas we have in our minds. However, in the
last stages of this process the matters of the form should be paid
some attention.
As a writer I used to revise in a very limited way. I used to
write two draft . The second ,the last, is not more than copying
the first one considering some changes that has to do with form.
.Changing the content would take place during writing the first
draft. I would discuss a point . Then I read it before I get into
the second one and change it If I did not like it or I felt that I
do not know how to link it with the second one. So, I was trying
to make my written work a unit from the first time I start writing
and that definitely made writing a difficult task. That also
hindered the progress of the writing that I feel held back by
worrying over linking the parts.
When I could understand that writing is a process especially the
fact that writing is not a linear process, I could make use of
drafting. I started to write about anything that has to do with my
topic. I would write several paragraphs or chunks of discourse
that are not connected or organized in a logical order. Once I
feel that wrote all the ideas I have, I would start writing the
second draft including that most relevant ideas that would help
forming a coherent unit. Then comes editing and it usually took my
utmost effort.
As I joined the OWCp, I started to draft my work efficiently. I
usually draft my written work several times to ensure its clarity
and coherence. Frankly, I am not a confident writer especially
when posting my writing online. Drafting and revising several
times give me the confidence required to decide to post my written
work. When I draft and revise, I assure that I did my best and
even if it was not that good I have got to share it if I really
want to improve my writing.
The number of drafts depends on my familiarity with the topic I am
writing about. However, most of the time I draft three times. The
first one is written in which I jot down all the things I have in
mind. After finishing I read it . Then I start typing the second
one without going back to the first one. The second is usually
messy but better than the first one. Then comes the third one in
which I tidy up the second draft .I may copy and paste some parts
and change others. The final draft is the one that is going to be
posted .
One of the main benefits I got from sharing online is the ability
to isolate myself from the written text. It is believed that
isolating oneself from his/her own written work and projecting the
reader’s role enable the writer to evaluate his/her work
critically. By posting anything I wrote, I could , to some extent,
achieve the isolation that could be rarely achieved before
posting. Once, I post it I can sense weaknesses in the style or
the lack of support of some ideas and things of the like. The
longer the period between posting and revising the more it helps
in noticing deficiencies in my writing. Most of the time, I could
not come up with some alternatives but at least that helped me
know what aspects of my writing need to be improved.
Finally, I would like
to share my second typed draft of this post . I hope it would help
in clarifying things .
Please do not forget
to download the attached file .
--Having
peers from different countries motivates me to share my culture
and religion. It is nice to introduce such topics in one writings.
And in the same time I feel that I am forever waiting for them to
share the same, because it is really nice to read others
perspectives on life, especially when those others are from places
different from yours
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It is through collaboration we will grow and we will be among the
leaders of collaborative learning as we share and care. But we
will not achieve our goals if we keep the idea that a one person
only is behind all these collaborative efforts. No, I want you
please to be aware of the importance of each member’s role here.
This word recognition comes as a result of your hard work and rich
contributions.
-- We are all one
team and we all work to help each other learn through
collaboration and communication. Learning is our major goals and
creating international recognition comes next
--I
am glad and happy to be a member in such project and my username
in the OWCp is (XXXX)… i used a nickname at first, because I
didn't want anyone to know my identity, and that gave me some sort
of freedom to write whatever I want without any stress, without
any fear of my mistakes, and when I felt I am ready to use my real
name.. I used it
Everybody knows that Saudi Arabia, is a desert kingdom, in the
Arabian Peninsula. But, only 3/4 of Saudi Arabia is desert.....how
about the rest?...Desert? No...guess again!
The Southern Region of Saudi Arabia is moutainous, which is almost
rainy all the season, especially in the summer and spring. It
stretches from the Northern borders of Yemen, to Al-Hijaz region.
As for the mountains, they are called Al-Sarawat Mountains, which
stretches from the South of the Arabian Peninsula, to the borders
of Jordan. Anyway, many people have this wrong idea that, Saudi
Arabia, is a desert land, full of three things: camals, Bedwins,
and oil !. However, no one would believe there is a rainy region,
or there are mountains, some greeny ones. Once, a foriegn teacher
asked the students to talk about their home towns in their
countries, we were from different countries; when my turn came, I
told them I came from a mounainous rainy area, that was misty all
summer. Well, my teacher knows I am from Saudi Arabia, and this
kept here quiet, as if she were thinking. "Is this true?!" with a
look, you could know that she didn't believe me, a question which
didn't need an answer. The class ended, and I was still thinking
about that look. I couldn't do anything about it, so I left it
behind me. Now I remembered that "look" again, and I ask you: Do
people think that Saudi Arabia is a land of desert...only? is this
view changed, or not?...
Bulgaria is a very
beautiful country in Europe. It is situated on the Balkan
Peninsula and has an outlet on the Black Sea. We have wonderful
nature – mountains and planes, rivers and lakes, beaches and ski
resorts, as well as ancient history and culture. Bulgaria is most
famous for its yogurt and rose oil. Its nickname is “the land of
the roses”. I should also mention the incredible Bulgarian
folklore. Here are some pictures from my country to enjoy.
I
liked the idea of sharing images and information about
our hometowns. I think this would help us understand
each other well and it gives us more ideas on how
people of these cities live, how do they think and
what do they do for living.
I am going in this topic to present my
most lovable city
Jeddah. Jeddah "the pearl of the
Red sea" is the largest city in
Saudi Arabia's
Western region. It is the most active city in the
Middle East too; lot of shopping centers, huge stores,
and very endless chain entertainment resorts located
on the sea shore.
When you visit Jeddah for the first time, you would
notice that it is hard to differentiate between day
time and night
time, since the city night is changed into a day time
due to the fact most of the Jeddah people prefer to
work and do shopping during the night time. Another
reason, is the strong lights which make Jeddah one of
the most brightened cities in the word during night
time.
You will also find that huge and uncountable shopping
centers
located in every street of the city are full of people
all night. Restaurants are full also of customers
especially those ones located at sea shore and serve
sea food. You would really like to eat there and enjoy
the night time in these restaurants with Jeddah people
who prefer night time for these activates to avoid
the high humidity
during the day time..
History of Jeddah and its population.
The
name of the Jeddah in Arabic means
seashore.
Jeddah represents to the fast development of
Saudi Arabia
as a whole country. According to my father who came
to Jeddah in the 50s from his small city village near
Taif City
( another beautiful city in
Saudi Arabia) he said " Jeddah was no more than one
square kilometer, and its population was less than one
hundred thousands. Now Jeddah is a huge city. Its
population is over two million people.
Jeddah is the KSA's principal
seaport. Thus it is the gateway to
Makkah
and
Madinah
for pilgrims arriving by sea. Jeddah every year
welcomes all pilgrims arriving by sea or by air.
Jeddah for this reason becomes the place for huge
demands on consumer goods, building materials, hotel
accommodation, and others. Those pilgrimages come
KSA
every year from all over the
globe to perform Hajj. ( Pilgrimage; the journey to
Makkah)
Jeddah's
Corniche
is one of the city's most impressive and pleasing
features. It is the longest sea shore in the
middle east or even in the world. Jeddah sea shore
is a three-part corniche, 20 miles in length. It
is decorated with many recreational facilities and
provided with superb views of the sea for
visitors.
I like to go at the
sunset to the Cornice. I love to see the sun when
it setting. At this time of the day you see Jeddah
young men and families do lot of sea sport.
In
this picture on the left, You see the Jeddah
fountain, which rises some 853 feet (260 meters high)
from the sea off Jeddah. This jet of water is the highest
of its type in the world. You would really love to see
that at night when you are flying over the Jeddah Sea
shore. Once you see this, it will never be a forgettable
sight.
More images would be added to see
the fountain at night.
Thank
You
I hope you enjoyed reading
about my home City. You may ask me questionsabout Jeddah..
I will answer you and give you a good tour
This is a brief story about
my home town. I enclose some pictures and I hope you will
enjoy them.
My
name is Rosica and I am from Burgas, Bulgaria – a city
situated on the coast of the Black Sea. I think that the
location of my hometown is one of the factors, which lead
me to choosing a future in the USA. Burgas is a major
tourist center and I was in touch with many different
cultures. My city is very opened to the world, to the new
changes. I will now tell you something more about my
beautiful city and show you some pictures.
The whole history of Burgas
is connected with the sea. The location of the city,
surrounded by water from three sides, is the basic reason
for its
foundation and development. Burgas is noticed by the
Europeans for the first time in 18th century – it was the
most important port in this part of the Balkan Peninsula.
At that time Bulgaria is under the Turkish yoke and is
not developed like the other European countries. Colonel Lermontov
liberates Burgas on 06 February 1878. The architectural
landscape of the city is quite gloomy: muddy streets,
many sea warehouses, scattered with no order,
half-destroyed buildings. But Burgas quickly develops
during the first decade of 20th century. The construction
of the central part of the city begins with a beautiful
sea garden, some other gardens, and a large casino on the
beach, a big market, a Chamber of Commerce. A railroad is
finished. In the first decades of the century the city
develops very rapidly its industry, banking, culture and
education. During the second half of the 20th century Burgas
becomes a major industrial center and a tourist area with
international fame.
Burgas
is the fourth largest city in Bulgaria, situated in the
southeastern part of the country. The climate here is
temperately continental with a distinct impact from the
Black Sea. One of the biggest industrial plants on the
Balkan Peninsula, Neftochim-EAD, is located in the
vicinity of the city. The Port of Burgas is the biggest
seaport in the country. A Duty Free Zone was established
in 1989 with the objective to create most attractive
conditions for foreign investors. The favorable
geographical location and advanced transport
infrastructure of Burgas are good prerequisites for
development of tourism and trade. The city’s airport is
also the biggest in Bulgaria.
Burgas is not only an important industrial center in the
country; it has also
considerable resources for tourism. What attracts people
here mostly is undoubtedly the sea. The city is a
starting point for visiting the seaside resorts in the
area - The Slantchev Bryag resort (the largest sea resort
in the country), The Elenite holiday village to the north
and The Duni holiday village, renowned for its unique
architectural composition, to the south. On the territory
of Burgas municipality there are 2 universities and 4
colleges comprising more than 6200 Bulgarian and foreign
students.
Another
thing I take pride in is the so-called “Flora”. It is an
exhibition of different flowers and is visited by people
from all over Europe. It is held in May when we have our
famous tulips growing.
I think these are the most important things about my city.
Now I am enclosing some pictures, which will show you
different sides of the city itself.
They arrived the last stair of Cairo tower, the friends
began to talk about the journey and its enjoyment, but she
kept at a distance step by step from her friends. He
followed her with his eyes. Then he approached to her and
found that she was sighing and looking at Egypt from the
upper of the tower .He said to her " why do you look at
her like this." She replied "I'm dazzled, although I
didn't visit any country but her, I'm sure that she is the
most beautiful place on the earth. Is there any country
talks about herself when you look at from a high tower as
her? . If you see her pyramids, you'll find that they talk
about her forefathers and their haughtiness, which daze
the world, and if you look at her Nile, it'll tell you
about the brownness of her sons. Her mosques, churches,
and her streets all talk to you about her power and
glory." She silenced looking at a calm smile of a tourist
and continued "look at this beautiful tourist and her
magic smile, the smile of each visitor comes to Egypt is a
signature on a certificate of valuation on her beauty." He
looked at the tourist and said, " Do you know that you are
similar to Egypt?" She " me, how?" He " she has a Nile, if
any one drinks from, he'll return to her and you have
eyes, if anyone look at, he'll long for you. Her pyramids
point to her greatness, and your speech shows that you are
educated and skillful. And when anyone visits her, a
beautiful smile will appear on his lips and so do I, when
I Look at Your face. You are her, and she is you."
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Egypt
is god's paradise on the earth. god has granted Egypt
numerous things that can not be counted. Egypt is well
known for a wonderful geographic position as it is the
centre of the world .It has a fine weather all the year
round .In addition to having the natural and his
historical sites spread all over its area ,so thousands of
foreign visitors flock to it every year.
Egypt
has long sandy beaches such as the beaches of the red sea
and Sinia which become a great attraction to foreign
visitors as they enjoy the dolden sea beaches with the
wonderful mountains around them and the clear blue water
for swimming ,scuba diving , snorkeling and many other
water sports.
For example ,Hurghada, safaga and sharm el sheikh are
considered as hosts to thousands of foreign visitors who
come to them every year for their fascinating scenery,
water sports and their coral reefs which look like
beautiful sea gardens and attract thousands
1. You walk carefully when it is
"slippy" outside.
2. You often go down
to the "crick". 3. You tell your
children to "red up" their rooms. 4. You've ever gotten
hurt by falling into a "jaggerbush".
5. Your mother or
grandmother has been seen wearing a "babushka" on her head. 6. You've ever "warshed"
the laundry. 7. You firmly believe
that George "Warshington" is on the dollar bill. 8. Mr. Webster is
wrong. You know full well that "ain't" is an English word. 9. You know you can't
drive too fast on back roads, because of the deer. 10. "Gumbands"... need
I say more? 11. You think Mario
Lemieux is a god.
12. When he returned to the
Pen's, you or someone you know had a party.
13. You know Beaver
Valley, Moon, Mars, Aliquippa, Monaca, Center, New Castle, are
actually names of towns.
14. A girl walks up to
three of her girl friends...."hey GUYS."
15.
You hear you guyses, and don't think twice. (ex. you guises
house is nice.")
16.
You know the three rivers by name. Yep, sure do. But, the tie
breaker would be, can a person then spell them? If that still
does not work, then name, pronounce correctly and spell the
name of the main tributary into the Monongahela at McKeesport.
17.
You remember the blizzard of '50 and remember not being able
to go outside because the snow was over your head, and you
would have suffocated. 18.
You've made an igloo and the neighborhood kids have played in
it.
19. You drink "pop", eat "hoagies", love perogies and gyros.
20. "Let me warsh these towels."
21. We don't have Chick-fil-a's or Waffle Houses
22. You know what a "still mill" is.
23. "I live just west of Picksburgh." (Pittsburgh)
24. You go to Ocean City or Virginia Beach for vacation.
25. You expect temps in the winter to be record
breaking cold and temps in the summer to be record breaking
hot.
26. You know what Eat 'N Park is and the song that goes with
it...Eat N Parks the place...for...SMILES.
27. You've been to Quaker Steak and Lube and LOVED it.
28. Y'ns is a commonly used word.
29. You don't have a spring break in high school.
30. You want to go to Pitt.
31. You spend your summers at Kennywood, SandCastle, or
Idlewild
33. You've been to the museum and the Pittsburgh Zoo for
school field trips.
34.You've swum in either the river or the fountain at the
Point.
35. You know what is meant by "the Point".
36. You know every word to Here We Go. (Here we go, Steelers,
here we go, Pittsburgh's going to the super bowl)
37. Chipped ham was always in your refrigerator when you were
growing up.
38. You refuse to buy any condiments besides Heinz.
39. No matter how hard you try you can't stop speaking
Pittsburghese.
40. You are reading this......
41. You send this on to family and friends who used to live in
the Pittsburgh area!